Feedback
The feedback we received from our
group was very constructive. They helped us make the storyline of our film more
interesting. Our initial plan was fused with the ideas of some of our class
members. Some of the feedback was very helpful. Originally we did not have a
set location to shoot each scene of our film. From the feedback one of the
class members said that we could film the flashback scenes in the park, the
couples having a picnic and so on. This was a great idea and finally gave us an
idea of where could shoot some scenes of the film. The main section of our film
is when the protagonist is in the car and he is piecing together through the flashbacks
that the deuteroganist is in an ill condition. For this scene we thought we
would portray things such as the girlfriend always being tired and looking very
ill. But from the feedback we got ideas such as the protagonist could discover
prescribed pills and letters from the hospital. This was a great piece of
feedback and this would be a clever way which the protagonist could piece
together that she is in a bad condition. Another great piece of feedback we received was
that when the protagonist is seeing the flashbacks we could use the fade effect
on final cut pro to convey each part of the flashback and the transition from
one flashback to another and also in the end we repeatedly switch from one
flashback to another to illustrate that the protagonist is going ballistic and
he is not in the right state of mind which then results in the car crash scene.
On the whole, the feedback we obtained was very constructive and helped us
evolve our idea.
- This is the feedback that we received from the idea that we pitched to our class
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